Every time characters in your novel speak, they should be: (1) telling us something about themselves; (2) conveying information that may well advance the story line and/or plot; (3) adding to the music or mood of the scene, story, or novel; (4) giving us a scene from a different POV (especially if the character who is speaking is not connected directly to the narrative voice); and/or (5) giving the novel a pedestrian feel.
(From This Year You Write Your Novel, by Walter Mosley, pp. 88-89.)
Where some writing books are long-winded, making writers work to find nuggets of information, Mosley's is short and filled with practical advice. Check it out.
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